Audience feedback about my 3 products

Over the past 2 days I have asked my peers for constructive criticism about my three products. They all felt that my products are eye catching and fit well with the genre of alternative/indie rock. However they also believed that the font I have used for the artist name - Jono is quite difficult to read and could be mistaken for the word 'Jana'. I also visited a year 7/8 tutor group and showed them my products - they also felt that the word Jono was difficult to read. Therefore I decided to edit the font by deleting the joins between the letters in order to make it clear and easy to read.

Here are my updated products:

 

Music video title

Digipak

Magazine advert