Teachers feedback

I have recently spoken to my media studies teacher about how I can improve my blog, the feedback she gave me was that my blog is currently at a good standard, however if I wish to develop it further I should:

• Include more audience feedback.
• Put more pictures on of shot ideas.
• Include more pictures of myself carrying out activities such as editing and filming.
• Go into more detail about what I have learnt from the presentations I have put on my blog.
• Consider how your audience consume media and how you would advertise to them if the video was official.

In order to improve my blog I plan on making all these improvements and they will assist me in filming, editing and evaluating my work.